Feedback for Group 1 Very sweet and clear voice! Good to have "back" and "forward" button. With the "Quiz" part, students can always check their understanding of the story. Is autoplay the soundclip possible here?
Feedback for Group 1: I particularly like the Quiz at the end of the story as it's interactive in a sense that it gives kids hints once they get the answers wrong. Also, I like the adapted version of the book in whcih simple repeated sentence patterns and words with the same rhymes are adopted so that teachers can use the book to facilitate their own teaching in classrooms. Besides, I like the moral of the story--Embracing friendship! Hurray! Good job!
Feedbake for Group 2 Interesting story with colourful and moving pictures. Enlarge pictures can draw students' attention. Voices are clear too. It is fantastic to upload a video about ants in the powerpoint so that students have better understanding of the story. Different colours in the words (genurds) help students pay more attention on 'ing' form. For the post-reading activity, it is a good idea for students to work in groups to practise in reading theatre. Nice work!
For Group 2: 2 or more stars: Like the pre-reading activity and post activity Highlights the language that the teacher wants to teach embedded video that allows extended learning A wish couldn't think of any= =' yet For Group 3 2 stars: Reading with feelings Good after class e-activity Wish: More interactive features
Feedback for group 3 The voices are clear with appropriate intonation. The story is very creative and it is very different from the traditional story that we have read. It will keep students' interest to read the books till the end. Interesting work!
Feedback for Group 3. A very impressive ebook and a very thoughtful teaching plan. An interesting story with beautiful voices. Will be a good one for students' self-reading activity. Well done.
Feedback for group 1: The book is fantastic. The pupils can read on their pace. After they have read the book. They can read it again or do a quiz. The teachers edited the book into a simplified version and added some dialogues which makes the story more interesting.
Group 1: -beautiful pictures and sounds, quiz can check students' understanding. -make the 'go to next page' to click on one button rather than click on the page would be better. Group 2: -Good to change the colour while reading the sentences. -Beautiful pictures -Arouse students' interest by adding a video -Students can answer teacher's question and give their reflection on the teacher's blog. Teacher can check students' understanding of the story.
Feedback for group 1: Good edited version for primary 1/ 2 students. Like the re-write sentences to help students consolidate the language pattern. I like the quiz part most. It is interesting and it helps to check students understanding.
Feedback for group 4: A very interesting ebook with questions, tasks and songs. Nice to use the animation to make the book more interesting. Nice work!
Feedback for group 4 A lot of elements, such as sound effects, quiz, extended information, videos and questions are found in the ebook. All these elements help arouse students' interest and keep their attention. I like the dictionary part most because it can really help the less able students and enhance their self learning skills.
Group 1: a very good ebook with questions to check pupils' understanding. Use different technology skills to make the ebook so pupils can read according to their reading pace. They can also find the correct answer if they make mistakes. Group 2: Attractive ebook. Inserting a film in the ebook makes it more interesting. It is a good point that pupils can make the recording.
feedback for group 2: reading activities are well-planned. colouring feature is really good. feedback fir group 3: clear voice recording. nice design for self- learning
Feedback for group 2: Fantastic feature about changing colour of the captions. Students can follow the sound and practise by themselves. Great effort and skills learning for fellow teachers.
Feedback for group 7 The book is about hobbies. The language focus is about using gerunds. The language pattern is repeated so the pupils can learn the gerunds easily. The work is brilliant!
Feedback for Group 7 The pictures are lovely and beautiful. Cool to have all identical heads and it is easy to make it. Very simple sentence structures for students to follow.
Feedback for Group 1: Interesting sound effect with differest people reading the text which help pupils learn the dialogues. Quiz can help teachers to check pupils understanding. The quiz can also arouse pupils interest to read more. The modified content can cater for the individual differences
Feedback for Group 2: Video inserted in the e-book is interesting and authentic. Short questions inserted among specific pages while reading can attract pupil to read.The audio reading is interesting too.
For Group 7 -Very nice story is selected. -cute and pretty pictures. -Clear sentence structures are shown in the story. -moral value is included. Well done ! Thanks for sharing ; ) by Group 5
Feedback for group 7: The story is very interesting. The pictures are great. It is a very good idea to put the characters on the pictures from other resources. It makes the story more attractive.
Feedback for Group 7: I appreciate a lot the effort Group 7 is put on making the characters of the e-book! The target vocabulary of hobbies and repeated sentence patterns are sure to be learnt by P.2 more easily after the use of this book. Some more interactive elements can be added to further arouse kids' interest.
Feedback for Group 7: It's good to have repetition of certain sentences (Just like me / Not like me). Also the repetitive formulaic sentence pattern (She likes ...ing) can help students master the use of the language.
For Group 7, it is good to include clear teaching focuses and procedures for using the ebook in the lesson. It is very appreciate that they have included moral education in the story. The group members paid a great effort to create the pictures of the story characters. The pictures and the words were very clear and big enough for the young learners.
Feedback for Group 1 An interesting book with claear and sweet voices told by Group 1. I like the end of the e-book which can let students choose to read it again or have a little quiz. It can cater for individual differences and let the students make a choice. Nice work!
Feedback for Group 1 The story is interesting. Students can read the story by their own pace. Students can choose the pages they like to read. For the quiz, teacher provide hints to help the students to understand the questions which help the less able students.
Feedback for Group 7 The story is simple and easy for student to read by themselves. The animation is great.
Feedback for Group 2: You have lots of interesting features in the ebook. I like the way you put words in layers and make animation. It makes the ebook a professional one. Well done!
Feedback for Group 2: You have nice voice. You read the story lively. You put a quiz at the end of the ebook. This test the students' understanding of the story. Your have clear thoughts that help the teachers to use the ebook to teach P.1 & 2 kids.
Feedback for Group 2: An interesting story with beautifuland colourful pictures. The animation is great and the quiz can test readers' understanding of the story. I like the story much. Links to introduce what grasshoppers and ants can be put in the story.
Feedback for Group 1
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and clear voice! Good to have "back" and "forward" button.
With the "Quiz" part, students can always check their understanding of the story.
Is autoplay the soundclip possible here?
Feedback for Group 1: I particularly like the Quiz at the end of the story as it's interactive in a sense that it gives kids hints once they get the answers wrong. Also, I like the adapted version of the book in whcih simple repeated sentence patterns and words with the same rhymes are adopted so that teachers can use the book to facilitate their own teaching in classrooms. Besides, I like the moral of the story--Embracing friendship! Hurray! Good job!
ReplyDeleteFeedbake for Group 2
ReplyDeleteInteresting story with colourful and moving pictures. Enlarge pictures can draw students' attention. Voices are clear too. It is fantastic to upload a video about ants in the powerpoint so that students have better understanding of the story. Different colours in the words (genurds) help students pay more attention on 'ing' form. For the post-reading activity, it is a good idea for students to work in groups to practise in reading theatre. Nice work!
A very interesting story!!
DeleteFor Group 2:
ReplyDelete2 or more stars:
Like the pre-reading activity and post activity
Highlights the language that the teacher wants to teach
embedded video that allows extended learning
A wish
couldn't think of any= =' yet
For Group 3
2 stars:
Reading with feelings
Good after class e-activity
Wish:
More interactive features
Feedback for Group 1:
ReplyDeleteClear voice!
It's good to have the quiz at the end to check students' understanding.
Feedback for group 3
ReplyDeleteThe voices are clear with appropriate intonation. The story is very creative and it is very different from the traditional story that we have read. It will keep students' interest to read the books till the end. Interesting work!
Feedback for Group 3.
ReplyDeleteA very impressive ebook and a very thoughtful teaching plan. An interesting story with beautiful voices. Will be a good one for students' self-reading activity. Well done.
Feedback for Gp 4:
ReplyDeleteGood to have extensive tasks, questions and videos to enhance students' understanding
Nice to use i-book to make a quiz
Attractive sound effects . It definitely can attract the readers' interest!
ReplyDeleteInteresting animation. The plane can fly where you want to!
this is the feedback for group 4
DeleteFeedback for group 1:
ReplyDeleteThe book is fantastic. The pupils can read on their pace. After they have read the book. They can read it again or do a quiz. The teachers edited the book into a simplified version and added some dialogues which makes the story more interesting.
Group 1:
ReplyDelete-beautiful pictures and sounds, quiz can check students' understanding.
-make the 'go to next page' to click on one button rather than click on the page would be better.
Group 2:
-Good to change the colour while reading the sentences.
-Beautiful pictures
-Arouse students' interest by adding a video
-Students can answer teacher's question and give their reflection on the teacher's blog. Teacher can check students' understanding of the story.
Feedback for group 1:
ReplyDeleteGood edited version for primary 1/ 2 students. Like the re-write sentences to help students consolidate the language pattern. I like the quiz part most. It is interesting and it helps to check students understanding.
Feedback for group 4:
ReplyDeleteA very interesting ebook with questions, tasks and songs. Nice to use the animation to make the book more interesting. Nice work!
Feedback for group 4
ReplyDeleteA lot of elements, such as sound effects, quiz, extended information, videos and questions are found in the ebook. All these elements help arouse students' interest and keep their attention. I like the dictionary part most because it can really help the less able students and enhance their self learning skills.
For the ebook from Group 1, I really like the quiz at the end of the ebook for checking students' understanding of the story.
ReplyDeletefeedback for Gp 5:
ReplyDeleteInteresting content and nice animations.
attractive.
May add a quiz after the story to consolidate the pupils' understanding.
Feedback for Group 5:
ReplyDeletethe audio is clear, good animations and interesting story
Group 1: a very good ebook with questions to check pupils' understanding. Use different technology skills to make the ebook so pupils can read according to their reading pace. They can also find the correct answer if they make mistakes.
ReplyDeleteGroup 2: Attractive ebook. Inserting a film in the ebook makes it more interesting. It is a good point that pupils can make the recording.
feedback for group 2:
ReplyDeletereading activities are well-planned.
colouring feature is really good.
feedback fir group 3:
clear voice recording.
nice design for self- learning
group1: Nice work! the quiz is good for checking students understanding. I like the hits that provided to students
ReplyDeletegroup 2 : attractive animation
Feedback for group 2:
ReplyDeleteFantastic feature about changing colour of the captions. Students can follow the sound and practise by themselves. Great effort and skills learning for fellow teachers.
group 3:
DeleteSelected a very interesting story with clear narration. Simple and funny story.
For Group 6
ReplyDelete-Good to bold the target words (verbs-past tense)
-the animation is included
Thank you for sharing : )
Thanks!
DeleteFeedback for group 7
ReplyDeleteThe book is about hobbies. The language focus is about using gerunds. The language pattern is repeated so the pupils can learn the gerunds easily. The work is brilliant!
For group 7
ReplyDeleteNice picture editing. Good job!
Feedback for Group 7
ReplyDeleteThe pictures are lovely and beautiful. Cool to have all identical heads and it is easy to make it.
Very simple sentence structures for students to follow.
Feedback for Group 1:
ReplyDeleteInteresting sound effect with differest people reading the text which help pupils learn the dialogues. Quiz can help teachers to check pupils understanding. The quiz can also arouse pupils interest to read more. The modified content can cater for the individual differences
Feedback for Group 2:
Video inserted in the e-book is interesting and authentic. Short questions inserted among specific pages while reading can attract pupil to read.The audio reading is interesting too.
For Group 7
ReplyDelete-Very nice story is selected.
-cute and pretty pictures.
-Clear sentence structures are shown in the story.
-moral value is included.
Well done ! Thanks for sharing ; )
by Group 5
Feedback for group 7:
ReplyDeleteThe story is very interesting. The pictures are great. It is a very good idea to put the characters on the pictures from other resources. It makes the story more attractive.
Feedback for Group 7: I appreciate a lot the effort Group 7 is put on making the characters of the e-book! The target vocabulary of hobbies and repeated sentence patterns are sure to be learnt by P.2 more easily after the use of this book. Some more interactive elements can be added to further arouse kids' interest.
ReplyDeletefeedback for group 2
ReplyDeleteVery colourful and attractive colours which can highlight students' interest in reading. good post activity idea
For Group 2
ReplyDeleteAn interesting story with amazing interactive animations.
Feedback for Group 7:
ReplyDeleteIt's good to have repetition of certain sentences (Just like me / Not like me). Also the repetitive formulaic sentence pattern (She likes ...ing) can help students master the use of the language.
For Group 7, it is good to include clear teaching focuses and procedures for using the ebook in the lesson. It is very appreciate that they have included moral education in the story. The group members paid a great effort to create the pictures of the story characters. The pictures and the words were very clear and big enough for the young learners.
ReplyDeleteFeedback for Group 1
ReplyDeleteAn interesting book with claear and sweet voices told by Group 1. I like the end of the e-book which can let students choose to read it again or have a little quiz. It can cater for individual differences and let the students make a choice. Nice work!
Feedback for Group 1
ReplyDeleteThe story is interesting. Students can read the story by their own pace. Students can choose the pages they like to read. For the quiz, teacher provide hints to help the students to understand the questions which help the less able students.
Feedback for Group 7
The story is simple and easy for student to read by themselves. The animation is great.
feedback for Gp 6:
ReplyDeleteInteresting content and good moral message.
May add some questions to let pps say what they will do if they were Enrico
Feedback for Group 2:
ReplyDeleteYou have lots of interesting features in the ebook. I like the way you put words in layers and make animation. It makes the ebook a professional one. Well done!
Feedback for Group 2:
ReplyDeleteYou have nice voice. You read the story lively. You put a quiz at the end of the ebook. This test the students' understanding of the story. Your have clear thoughts that help the teachers to use the ebook to teach P.1 & 2 kids.
Feedback for Group 2:
ReplyDeleteAn interesting story with beautifuland colourful pictures. The animation is great and the quiz can test readers' understanding of the story. I like the story much.
Links to introduce what grasshoppers and ants can be put in the story.